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Wednesday, February 27, 2013

Return

This is a short story I wrote for Wretched Scars a book of short stories and poems I cowrote with Ray Labuen

 
William Gordon always said he would return to his hometown once he retired. What he didn’t think about was how he’d be forced into early retirement. William had an accident at work that made his return to his hometown occur twenty years earlier than he expected. William left his hometown immediately after high school and only came back when his mother died ten years ago. William is now moving into the house his mother left him in her will. Once moved in though, William remembered why he left his hometown in the first place.

            William left in the first place because he never felt he belonged in a small town. He wasn’t like anyone else and it made him an easy target by his former classmates and the people of the town. William started having flashbacks about his teenage years. After only being in town for a week, William was already losing sleep to the flashbacks. He would wake up after remembering being thrown in a dumpster when the trucks were getting ready to pick them up, or the time three of his classmates decided to beat him up, the teacher was the parent to one of the guys that beat William up so this made it difficult for William o go to anyone. After weeks of nightmares from his earlier years in town William decides to find only person he ever considered a true friend to make his return more enjoyable.

            Marissa Draiman was William’s only friend growing up in town. She was also frowned upon by classmates and the locals in town. However, unlike William, Marissa had to stay in town after high school to help take care of her aunt. Marissa’s aunt was her guardian because Marissa’s parents died when she was four and her aunt was the only one who would take her in. Shortly after William left town, Marissa’s aunt finally succumbed to her medical conditions and died. After being treated like an outcast her whole life and the only people close to her no longer in her life. Marissa was gradually losing her sanity.

            The last time William was in town, he did not get to see her because he was informed she was sent to an asylum after her aunt died. She was deemed unfit to live amongst other people. William found out this time around she was back in her old house and he wanted to see the one friend he did have when he was growing up. He knocked on the door to what looked like an abandoned house to find her in horrible condition. Marissa had shaved her head because she was pulling her hair out while in the asylum, she also had a rope mark around her neck from where she tried to commit suicide when she left the asylum. It was obvious to William that Marissa was mentally broken and as her only friend he wanted to help her. He also felt this was needed for his own sake to prevent him from having the flashbacks he had been having lately.

            After talking to Marissa for an hour he was starting to feel sympathy for her ending up in an asylum, he also felt guilt because he felt that he was partially responsible for her ending up there.  William was also slightly confused, after every few sentences, Marissa would mumble the words “I didn’t kill me” and when William would ask Marissa to repeat herself, she’d simply say nothing. Despite Marissa being mentally broken, William felt he needed to be with his friend, especially since he wasn’t around after he graduated high school.

            Even though William wanted to comfort his friend, Marissa would only talk about her time in the asylum. He wanted her to talk about other topics, especially since Marissa speaking of the asylum was only making William’s flashbacks from high school worse. After hearing her talk of the asylum for three hours, Marissa passed out. William was on his way out the door when he saw a newspaper, he couldn’t believe what he was looking at. The paper was opened to Marissa’s obituary, according to the article, she committed suicide in the asylum over a year ago. He turned around, Marissa was floating in the air, and she yelled “I DID NOT KILL ME!” and disappeared. William took the paper and any other evidence and went back to his house.

            After seeing why Marissa’s house was abandoned, William wondered to himself how exactly did he see her and was having a conversation with her without noticing the obituary. However, he decided he wanted to know why she kept saying “I didn’t kill me.” He went to the house of one of the doctors at the asylum, the doctor let him in and they talked for an hour. He found out Marissa’s suicide was actually a cover-up by the doctor. He gave Marissa the wrong medication, which killed her instantly, the doctor, made it look like a suicide and knew no one, would look into it. A month after Marissa’s death, the doctor stepped down and he admits to William this was the first time he told the truth about Marissa. William looked at the doctor and forgave him for the incident but he wanted the doctor to admit the truth to the asylum.

            On his way out, he saw a newspaper, this one was flipped to the doctor’s obituary. The doctor killed himself leaving a note saying he did something unforgiveable. Nothing else was on the note other than “I’m sorry”. William went to the cemetery where Marissa was buried and looked at the grave. He simply said he would find a way to prove her death was an accident by another person. After he said those words he heard Marissa’s voice say “Thank you!” He turned around but he did not see his friend. He saw a newly dug grave and walked to it.

            William could not believe his eyes, he was staring at his own grave, and he realized he saw Marissa and the doctor because he himself was also dead. Then William remembered, the accident at work did not put him in retirement, the accident killed him. He remembered before dying, he said he would not leave the earth until he could prove his best friend did not kill herself. The flashbacks were occurring but they were not his memories, they were Marissa’s memories. He was remembering her pain and torture as a way to motivate him to find out the truth about his friend.
            After finding out the truth about Marissa’s death and the truth to the doctor’s death, the information appeared on the news shortly after. As William saw the truth unravel about his friend, an angel appeared before him. The angel looked at him and told him it was time for him to come home. William reached out to the angel and he went home.

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